Monday, 4 April 2016

Improvements needed

After evaluating the opening sequence, I found some bits where we can improve. For example, because there are only 3 titling shots, we need 9 more. Here are screenshots of where we can put titles:


Another thing that we can improve on is the title font. So far it has a blue glow which doesn't really fit the codes and conventions of our chosen genre which is a romantic/drama.


Finally, the transition between the two scenes doesn't look right. This is because during the editing process we tried to add a black background so the flashback transition is slower, but as you can see this has failed making the audience miss the action of the dialogue. 


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